Revised Helen Keller
Revise paper using these suggestions
You should expand on the preventative measures (see the rubric). You have grammar mistakes, which are problematic, especially for a graduate level paper — You should proofread carefully. For example, you wrote: “…correctly. how an eye normally works…” You need to expand on your topics and your literature searching – where are the references from the annotated bibliography? There are some APA formatting issues – I suggest reviewing APA formatting for references. Also, be aware that bulleted lists are to be avoided in APA papers.
Please use all annotated bibliography
Check rubric to heko guide papaer