Revised Helen Keller

Revise paper using these suggestions


You should expand on the preventative measures (see the rubric).    You have grammar mistakes, which are problematic, especially for a graduate level paper — You should proofread carefully. For example, you wrote:    “…correctly. how an eye normally works…”   You need to expand on your topics and your literature searching – where are the references from the annotated bibliography?  There are some APA formatting issues – I suggest reviewing APA formatting for references.   Also, be aware that bulleted lists are to be avoided in APA papers.


Please use all annotated bibliography


Check rubric to heko guide papaer 

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